i like how you wrote good details and how they connect with what you think next time say what others are thinking like why is his dad doing this but your story was great
Good job, Jude! Your voice was loud and clear, and your examples were great! You hooked me in the introduction, but maybe you could give it some examples?
😊 good job jude i think that your literary essay was really good because you brought parts from the book.
ReplyDeleteI loved how you used figurative language
ReplyDeleteI liked how you brought what the author said and used it to strengthen your literary essay.
ReplyDeletei like how you wrote good details and how they connect with what you think next time say what others are thinking like why is his dad doing this but your story was great
ReplyDeleteFantastic job! I love how you organized your writing, I can tell where a paragraph ended and where a new one started!
ReplyDeleteI love how you showed a life lesson in the text. #greatjob❤️💕💖💓😘♡
ReplyDeleteGood job, Jude! Your voice was loud and clear, and your examples were great! You hooked me in the introduction, but maybe you could give it some examples?
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